From 4b42f441dc6aa2c6b948ef1cf97fa090b0b92e3e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: yuni <hut@hut.pm>
Date: Tue, 17 Sep 2024 00:37:55 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] improve Luna's conversation

---
 src/chats/serenity.yaml | 43 +++++++++++++++++++----------------------
 1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/chats/serenity.yaml b/src/chats/serenity.yaml
index 8ea1390..5f6e83e 100644
--- a/src/chats/serenity.yaml
+++ b/src/chats/serenity.yaml
@@ -360,13 +360,12 @@
 
 - chat: Luna
 - "if $$player_suit_health_percent < 100":
-  - Holy shit!
-  - Look at all those scratches and tears on your suit!
+  - Holy shit! Look at all those scratches and tears on your suit!
   - script: repairsuit
   - set: grateful
   - Let me fix that!
-  - And I topped off your oxygen tank while I'm at it.
   - script: refilloxygen 1
+  - And I topped off your oxygen tank while I'm at it.
   - goto: mainnode
 - Oh hey you! Have an oxygen refill!
 - script: refilloxygen 1
@@ -374,7 +373,7 @@
 
 - label: mainnode
 - if: "$grateful"
-  Thank you so much!:
+  Thanks for the help!:
   - No problem at all!
   - set: grateful 0
   - goto: mainnode
@@ -414,8 +413,7 @@
       - goto: EXIT
     - goto: mainnode
 - What are you up to?:
-  - I'm running a workshop. Come by if you need any repairs!
-  - Tinkering on various projects.
+  - Tinkering on various projects and running a workshop. Come by if you need any repairs!
   - What kind of projects?:
     - A tuned MotorAce spaceship, an impact dampener, and... a secret project.
     - label: projects
@@ -468,17 +466,15 @@
         - Uh huh.
         - Hey, I gotta do some stuff, see you around.
         - goto: EXIT
-      - In the future only, of course.
+      - Into the future only, of course.
       - label: continuemonologue
-      - I want to get all the way out to the edge of the visible universe, to the end of time, and watch the world evaporate into nothingness.
+      - I want to get all the way out to the edge of the visible universe.
+      - To the end of time, to watch the world evaporate into nothingness.
       - Got the popcorn waiting already.
-      - This is the ultimate engineering challenge, but I'm convinced that it is possible, and I just *have* to do this.
-      - And when I work on it, the whole universe turns silent.
-      - There is just me, my tools, and the metal.
-      - It's bliss.
+      - This is the ultimate engineering challenge, but I'm convinced that it is possible.
+      - I just *have* to do this.
       - Fascinating.:
         - Thanks for listening. I appreciate it.
-        - Usually nobody cares.
         - goto: projects
       - Wow, you're edgy.:
         - And you're a rounding error.
@@ -486,9 +482,11 @@
         - goto: EXIT
       - Yeah, sorry for the monologue. Anything else?
       - goto: projects
-    - Good luck with that!:
-      - Thanks!
+    - There was something else I wanted...:
       - goto: mainnode
+    - Bye.:
+      - So long, drifter!
+      - goto: EXIT
     - goto: timeout
   - Good luck with that!:
     - Thanks!
@@ -500,15 +498,14 @@
   - if ~$thinking:
     - Well, uh...
     - set: thinking
-    - How should I put this? Don't take it personally, but...
-    - I really don't like people.
-  - I'm happy to help you, don't get me wrong.
-  - But... not really because I care about you.
+    - Don't take it personally, but...
+    - I don't really like people.
+  - Don't get me wrong, I'm happy to help you.
   - I enjoy the challenge of fixing, mending, creating.
-  - Humans in general, though, ravage and exploit.
+  - People in general, though, ravage and exploit.
   - It's in their nature, and I can't stand it.
-  - I just want to get away. From all this insanity, triviality,...
-  - Just want to pursue my projects without anyone standing in my way.
+  - I just want to get away from all this insanity...
+  - Just want to tinker without anyone bothering me.
   - goto: mainnode
 - if: "$timetravel"
   Do you think time travel into the past is possible?:
@@ -572,7 +569,7 @@
   - We have talked before. You told me to die, come back to you with a chef hat, and say that sentence.:
     - Hah, so the plan worked out! YES!
     - Let me apologize though. I must have been rude before you showed me proof for your story.
-    - There are just so many bullshiters in the world and I don't have the patience anymore.
+    - There are just so many bullshitters in the world and I don't have the patience anymore.
     - But I believe you now.
     - If there is *anything* I can do for you, let me know. This is amazing!
     - goto: mainnode